“If a writer stops observing he is finished. Experience is communicated by small details intimately observed.”
― Ernest Hemingway

Many (dare I say most?) poems call attention to details, or as Irene Latham says, “Explode the moment.”  Many poets pay close attention to the visual details around them to gain inspiration for their poetry.  They observe and stash away snippets.  Then they are deviled by the details of sorting through the scraps of words that they have collected and stitching them together into a beautiful poem.

I have a “detail noticing” challenge for you, but first some background: when I was little, my mother would occasionally buy Games Magazine for me.  My favorite puzzle was a series of extremely close-up photographs.  The challenge was to identify the depicted object with just that visual snippet of information.  Through the magic of cropping, I present to you a series of such photos.  Feel free to guess the subject of each picture.  Observing the tiny details helps!

If you'd like a clue or two:

  1. Sipper
  2. Ache preventer
  3. Protector
  4. I’ve always felt this way
  5. That’s just how I roll
  6. Not kidney, not jelly, not garbanzo

How many did you figure out?  In case any of these eyeball benders have you stumped, you can find the answers at the end of last week’s blog post.

 

Here is a wonderful example of observing details – the poem “Winter Trees” by William Carlos Williams, which starts:

        All the complicated details

        of the attiring and

        the disattiring are completed!

        A liquid moon

        moves gently among

        the long branches.

to read the rest of Winter Trees, please click here.

 

To see the details observed by others this Poetry Friday, please visit our poetic host Rose at Imagine the Possibilities for this week's roundup.

 

32 comments

  • Fun challenge, Tracey! I think I have 4 and maybe 5; going to check now....Yep--your wineglass fooled me (blue stem?) and the bubble wrap is not like any I've seen. Great photos, great details, and I like that WCW poem, although somewhat better ending where you cut it...the liquid moon among the long branches, aah!
  • What a fun way to remind us to really USE our powers of observation to craft our poetry! This would make a great classroom lesson!! (I only got 2 right.)
    And like the others, I'm swooning over WCW's winter trees. Perfection.
  • I only got 3! There's a cool children's book that does this called ZOOM! As someone who loves macrophotography, I love details! 
    • That is cool idea for a book.  I know a guy who started a company that does macroscopic photography and has some really cool images that have ended up in call kinds of places.  For example, he did a close-up picture of a rose that became wallpaper in a restroom (I think in a cruise ship terminal)!  If you are interested, his website is https://macroscopicsolutions.com/about/   It has a gallery of his work.

      Edited on Sunday, 17 September 2023 14:24 by Tracey.
  • What a fun post! I loved the visual challenges (only got 2!) and the reminder to "intimately observe." Winter trees always move me, and that WCW poem is just fabulous, and new to me. Oh that "liquid moon"! 
  • What a great post, Tracey! I loved GAMES magazine...still love puzzles that draw attention to detail. I love to turn a sit or a walk into a poem. 

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