A huge thank you to the friend-of-every-poet, and a truly kind soul, Irene Latham for hosting this week! Please visit Live Your Poem to enjoy some of Irene’s gorgeous ArtSpeak poetry and the weekly roundup.

Thank you to Linda Baie for inviting us to join the #PoetryPals September Poetry Challenge. Here’s Linda’s description:

We’re wandering through Wallace Stevens’ “13 Different Ways of Looking…” at something. Maybe it’s not 13 ways – maybe it’s only seven. Maybe it’s not a blackbird or anything alive, but something inanimate. Whatever happens, your way of looking will be different than mine, and I’m here for it. Are you in? Good!

While sitting at my desk pondering this wonderful challenge, the first thing that caught my eye was my big toe!

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Note: None of these are my toes. That felt too weird to post, although, posting other people’s toes is probably also rather weird…

Anywho, thirteen things! Well, there aren’t many similarities between my poem and “Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird” by Wallace Stevens. His poem was more insightful and poetic, more clearly formatted, and perhaps based upon a better topic!    : / 

But I had fun!

 

The Big Toe

I support this whole operation:
     balance queen,
          head of the household,
               first in line for a swift kick.

You say I take more
than my share
of shoe space?
Maybe I am a
polish hog,
but I can’t help if I’m
big boned.
Besides, I’m only a
little piggy …
when I go to market.

Even though
my head
sticks out farthest,
I’m stubbed far less
than my smaller siblings.
They tend to
cut
corners.

I’m a born leader.
I move independently.
Sure, I’m a bit
calloused,
but who doesn’t
have a few
rough edges?

I work proficiently
and silently,
unlike that
high-and-mighty thumb.
What’s so great
about being opposable
anyway?

You can count on me.
I’m a steadfast,
often-neglected-yet-vital
phalange.

© Tracey Kiff-Judson, 2024

 

Wishing you a toe-tally Happy Poetry Friday!

26 comments

  • Tracey, have I said before how much I love the zany you bring to your writing? I mean, sometimes we poets get caught in the same circle of subject matter...but then YOU come along and write about a big toe! Wonderful. I was smiling the whole way through your poem! (My lifelong flip-flop habit has made my big toes go in their own direction, I'm told from gripping the shoe with them all these years...so this poem feels like a real friend). xo
  • Tracey, I waited a long time to get a pedicure so your poem prompted me to make an appointment. Your poem is delightful. Several lines caught my attention. Adding a nursery rhyme thought into your poem works so well:
    Besides, I’m only alittle piggy …when I go to market.
  • This is hilarious, Tracey! I love the zaniest look at our feet & who knew that people had such fancy toes (a la your pics), but I most love the reference, "I’m only a little piggy … - many laughs & kudos for the smiles this morning!
  • LOL - posting pictures of your toes v. posting pictures of other people's toes is ...☺ Oh, well, blogging is weird. We're all here in the weird with you. ☺
    Here's to the vital phalanges - a bit calloused and worn, but who NEVER cuts corners - here's to hoggin' the polish and standing out strong. I LOVE this. Thanks for playing along today.
  • Tracey, I love the fun you had with this. So different than other Wallace Stevens' inspirations, but I really enjoyed reading about this biggest little piggy. I toe-tally had a good time reading it!
  • This is so fun! Your humor is fantastic. Big boned, polish-hog, phalange. It's all super and I'm smiling right here and now and have a strong urge to polish my tootsies. 
     
     
  • This is so clever, Tracey! I chuckled the whole way through. I have foot problems and many rough edges. Thank you for helping me feel some toe love again :>D
  • Tracey, truly a funny, original take! I think my favorite lines are: 
    I support this whole operation:     balance queen,          head of the household,               first in line for a swift kick.
     
    Thanks for the laughter! 

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