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Thanks to Marcie Flinchum Atkins, I have fallen in under the spell of the double dactyl. As Marcie referenced in her recent blog post, the double dactyl was popularized in the 1960’s in the publication Esquire magazine and later in the collection Jiggery-Pokery: A Compendium of Double Dactyls, edited by Anthony Hecht and John Hollander.

Double Dactyl Form Rules:

  • 2 stanzas of dactylic verse, usually with a silly tone
  • Stanza 1:
    • line 1 – a jingle or "spell," in the meter /uu/uu   (DUM-da-da   DUM-da-da)
    • line 2 – a name, in the meter /uu/uu
    • line 3 – information about the person, in the meter /uu/uu
    • line 4 – meter /uu/       (DUM-da-da-DUM)
  • Stanza 2:
    • line 5 – meter /uu/uu
    • line 6 – meter /uu/uu
    • line 7 – meter /uu/uu
    • line 8 – meter /uu/ and must rhyme with line 4

where "u" is an unstressed beat/syllable, and "/" is a stressed syllable, so the meter has a DUM-da-da DUM-da-da rhythm.  DUM-da-da is called a "dactyl," so doubling gives the term "double dactyl."  

So here goes …

 

Booboo Baboingity

 

Springity sproingity,

Booboo Baboingity

Sprang from a bridge with a

Leap and a prayer.

 

Bungee cord snapped in two.

Last thing I heard was Boo

Yelling out something -- I

think was a swear.

 

Hmmm.  Maybe I had better keep practicing.

 

Happy Poetry Friday!  This week, be sure to stop by and visit Carol at Beyond LiteracyLink for all things poetic!

28 comments

  • I think your  "Springity sproingity,  Booboo Baboingity"
    is pretty good and full of smiles too, loved reading it out loud. Kinda reminds me of the book, Gerald McBoing-Boing, thanks Tracey!
  • Tracey, wow, that is a mouthful. I feel a bit like a beginning reader trying out those words that aren't in my sight vocabulary. They are brilliant fun though. You are inspiring me to check out and learn more about the double dactyl. I don't understand the /uu/uu, but I can sure appreciate the fun story you tell and the lovely sounds that are created! 
    • Denise, yes, there are definitely some nonsense words! I should have explained the annotation. My apologies!  I will update the post to clarify.  "u" is an unstressed beat/syllable, and "/" is a stressed syllable, so the meter has a DUM-da-da DUM-da-da rhythm.  DUM-da-da is called a "dactyl," so doubling gives the term "double dactyl."  I hope you give it a try!  They are fun to write.  I was actually trying to write one about a millipede last night and had NO success!

      Edited on Thursday, 28 September 2023 09:31 by Tracey.

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